incredibly stiff animation, move the bodies with the character's movement and make them look more intimidating other than just pointing their gun forwards in a relaxed manner.
backgrounds feel uninspired and lazily put together with just a few 2 or 3 boxes put down and nothing else.
the v-cam is a bit too close, which by itself isn't too much of a problem, but still might be checked out
the pacing at some points is just god awful, a man has just been hit by some random robot that has about 3 to 4 other people by his side to fight him, but instead they just stand there, looking.
sfx, were alright
weapons were drawn pretty well, but some others look like shit in comparison to others.
well, hope you still try to become better, you might get there eventually.
I will work on my animation.
I am not good and backgrounds but I will try to upgrade it.
Vcam is my problem too.
Story at the end was a bit lazy.
All weapons I drew took me days.
I will be better I promise.
i like the part when that girl thing with like mickey mouse bands on her head dies
me to ;)
Okay, but honestly, this is a pretty good movie, smooth as fuck, but a bit slow.
Though, it wasn't bad in any other sense.
p.s. happy bday grump
generally speaking the animation was good, i could understand the idea and it was executed pretty well, but the drawings could use some more effort and improvement.
I know, the drawings could be better, also, this is my first time making this type/style of animation.
Thanks dude anyway :)
this is the best worst thing i have ever seen in my entire life
i also like the music
Some parts were decent, some were great,but fucking boring.
Also, the quality is utter dog shit.
Lovely animation, fast paced fighting, just like old times.
Although the spine could use one more bone, as otherwise sometimes movements might look stiff.
Not the best movie but something new.
Although as much as i would like to put 5 stars, i wont.
Its a loading screen, thats it.
Well, an interesting loading screen accompanied with good music and good visuals.
I like the effort put into this, but there's nothing else to it, just a loading screen.
Im pretty fond of this and to be honest i like the idea.
The story is somewhat better than the usual ''break into some house and shoot everyone''
Though, the animation and timing could use alot of work.
From what i can see, you use a framerate that is smaller than 30 fps. Dont do that.
Also, dont shrink sprites, it looks pretty bad.
And you used the wrong hand for holding a weapon, but we all did that at some point when we start out, so i give you a pass.
Overall a nice little movie, could use alot of work and more length.
Hey, not bad.
Just add more time, a story and your anims will be seen as much more better.
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